Comments for "A Self-Made Goddess"
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Comments for "A Self-Made Goddess"
by Ninjaguineapig » Mon Nov 28, 2011 1:22 pm
Sorry chapter one was so short, I just don't have time right now.
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Re: Comments for "A Self-Made Goddess"
by Ninjaguineapig » Tue Feb 14, 2012 12:13 pm
Well, there's a short Chapter 2, and a longer Chapter 3.
Anyone care to tell me how shitty my combat scene was?
Anyone care to tell me how shitty my combat scene was?
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Re: Comments for "A Self-Made Goddess"
by Fjord » Thu May 16, 2013 6:45 pm
I found it quite interesting. It was concise and descriptive, can't ask for much more.
Are you planning to continue writing these?
Are you planning to continue writing these?
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