I love the voiceover!
But could we get a video without
the text overlaying the video? I find the text distracting, and I'd prefer to just be listening and looking at the art
I second this, please. It's very distracting, especially that wall of text at 1:46-1:54.
Consider instead using YouTube's built-in caption feature. It's easier from the video creation side-- you just copy-paste your text into the caption box, and YouTube automatically listens to the audio and times caption placement for you, instead of having to add each caption manually. And for those people who prefer no text, it can be toggled off with one click.
I like the voiceover; it feels like a good audio book. I will get used to the art. The pan/zoom of the video leaves something to be desired... you could do so much more, even in a short time! Develop the artwork in 2-3 layers, and pan them at slightly different rates for a parallax effect! The tiny bit of animation (light getting brighter as the wall broke down) was my favorite part. This is a good time to practice effects you might like to use in the motion comic... just simple stuff.