Comments on 'Post-Apocawypse' and 'I Believe in Magic'

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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby Sinrus » Sat Jan 02, 2010 5:06 pm

Satan's real name is Lucifer. I tried to get the personalities right for the ones named after archangels, but I have a fondness for misnomers. Btw, I need to edit Jacob's name to Joseph. And nope, not Legend of Zelda.
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby elmagnifico » Sat Jan 02, 2010 8:18 pm

Ah. It's an Avatar reference then. Wonder what sort of foolamancy was used to get explosions into their capitol?
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby Sinrus » Sat Jan 02, 2010 9:17 pm

dingding we have a winner. I saw the movie couple days ago and it was AWESOME. What part gave it away? :D
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby elmagnifico » Sat Jan 02, 2010 9:36 pm

The blue and ten-feet tall part. I haven't seen the movie, but from what I've been told that's what the natives in Avatar look like.
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby Sinrus » Sat Jan 02, 2010 10:21 pm

You should see it, it's fanastic.
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby President_Allosaurus » Sat Jan 02, 2010 11:48 pm

Avatar really is a fantastic movie!

And on-topic, I'm really interested to see where this goes. It's progressing very quickly, I like it.
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby Sinrus » Sun Jan 03, 2010 12:21 am

Thanks. I was up in the middle of the night when I began the whole Fungal Empire thing and had no idea where to go with that, so I rushed through it and generally screwed the whole thing up and ended up using it as a placeholder for what was going one while Draviston built up for this war. I'm going to start getting into actual strategy now, and prolong this next storyline a bit.
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby Ninjaguineapig » Sun Jan 03, 2010 2:12 pm

Great update. I like the blue guys. Shame they'll have to be destroyed.

BTW: i was thinking about the name Jewish tradition gives Satan (I won't write it. Seriously, I'm too scared. Satan isn't something you want paying attention to you).
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby Sinrus » Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:32 pm

Oh, now that you mention it I think I've heard the name before, can't remember it though. I'm not Jewish, but I have a friend and I'll ask him tomorrow. And I'm so happy to be getting the feedback on this! I want to really develop the Ni'va before they all get killed off.

EDIT: Just curious, who's seen the movie? If you think I'm against something, give a shout.

EDIT2: Boom. Update.
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby Ninjaguineapig » Mon Jan 04, 2010 11:51 am

Maybe the blue guys and Draviston fight to a stalemate and they ally?
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby Sinrus » Thu Jan 07, 2010 6:51 pm

I have an idea for a second fan-fic to make. It will involve a lot of speculation into the nature of magic and the Magic Kingdom itself, which I think is a pretty cool road to go down, but it will cut down on frequency of updates for Post-Apocawypse. In fact, I probably won't update it again for at least a week while I get this new story started. So, I'll leave it up to my fans.

Do you want to continue with my (more or less) daily updates of P-A?
Or do you want me to cut down on those and begin a new story?

EDIT: I put up the first one as a sampler.
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby Sinrus » Fri Jan 08, 2010 5:19 pm

No comments yet? I put up a second page, and I will assume that you want me to keep going if nobody gives their opinion.
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby Sinrus » Mon Jan 11, 2010 6:24 pm

Since I received no responses, this can officially be treated as "Comments on Fan-Fic by Sinrus."

So, any guesses on the name puns? Everybody yet introduced is a pun.
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby Ninjaguineapig » Tue Jan 12, 2010 10:58 am

Argh! I don't enjoy punny things! Don't ruin it for me!
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby Sinrus » Tue Jan 12, 2010 3:57 pm

I'm sorry. I try not to make my puns glaringly obvious, but they're in there.
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby Ninjaguineapig » Sun Jan 24, 2010 12:19 am

That last line... great.
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby Sinrus » Sun Jan 24, 2010 8:52 am

Thanks! I have a hard time trying to push emotion into my writing. My stories usually come out sort of cold and impersonal, but I can get a few good lines or paragraphs every once in a while.
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby Ninjaguineapig » Mon Jan 25, 2010 12:30 am

Looks like FAQ will fall a third time...
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby Zombie » Wed Feb 03, 2010 12:29 am

I don't believe I've said this yet, so here it is: I'm quite enjoying the story, still there are some minor errors that have bugged me since the first reread.

Here they are:
Sinrus wrote:Another great gaping hole aloud Arrekk access.
allowed

Sinrus wrote:"Ah, you have stumbled upon my request. I would like for you to hire a changemancer from the Magic Kingdom to cast a permanent spell which will change the crossbows of all entering allied units to crossbows."
Crossbows to Crossbows?

Sinrus wrote:Two were already imbedded in his torso, another in his left wing.
embedded

I think there is one more but the sheer volume of work (which, again, I enjoy) makes it harder to find.
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Re: Comments on Post-Apocawypse

Postby Sinrus » Wed Feb 03, 2010 9:25 am

Thanks, they have been retcon'd. I can't find the first one though...
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