Reactions to A Tale From Traz

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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby ragingrage » Thu May 27, 2010 6:38 pm

oooh...that was excellent. I liekd the throwing knifes part, I only realized later the connection to cicuses :)
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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby cloudbreaker » Tue Jun 08, 2010 5:28 pm

There is still more to come, but it will probably be at least another week before I get a chance to post anything new. I've been busy with other, more important, non-erf projects. Sorry for the long wait and thank you for being patient.
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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby Chris Goodwin » Thu Jul 01, 2010 1:54 pm

Just read up to current, and I'm loving it! :)
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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby Azgrut » Fri Jul 23, 2010 5:50 am

Woohoo! Update!

More plx :P
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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby cloudbreaker » Fri Jul 23, 2010 9:22 am

Azgrut wrote:Woohoo! Update!

More plx :P

Request granted. ;)

And thanks for reading!
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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby Ninjaguineapig » Fri Jul 23, 2010 11:01 am

You're making it real easy to hate the prince. I like it.
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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby Azgrut » Sat Jul 24, 2010 5:28 am

That was quick :).

I like it.
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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby Welf von Ehrwald » Thu Jul 29, 2010 4:48 pm

I saw your story yeasterday, thumbs up.
As said before: more updates plz :)
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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby cloudbreaker » Thu Jul 29, 2010 9:43 pm

There will probably be another update within the next 24 hours (possibly the next 12). ;)
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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby Azgrut » Fri Jul 30, 2010 9:26 am

The story is getting clearer and clearer. The real villan emerges. :)
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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby zilfallon » Sun Aug 01, 2010 4:41 am

3 words: oh. my. god.

this is an excellent story! i had a bit free time before i went to sleep, then i checked this story out of curiosity...and then i decided it was far better than a few hours sleep :)

i can't find anything else to say...story is very good. but you should have made some names cuter, more erf-ish. like cwocodile instead of croc would have been nice to see, although don't misunderstand me, i don't think it is a big deal.

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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby cloudbreaker » Sun Aug 01, 2010 6:51 am

Thanks zilfallon. That means a lot.

I'm glad you enjoyed reading it, because I enjoy writing it. And I still plan on seeing this story through to the end, so more updates are sure to come. ;)
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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby cloudbreaker » Wed Aug 25, 2010 3:18 am

Man, I really gotta get some more updates posted soon.
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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby Lor » Wed Aug 25, 2010 11:43 pm

Yet another enjoyer checking in to add to the encouragement for both altruistic and selfish reasons. Looking forward to seeing the next development.
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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby zilfallon » Fri Aug 27, 2010 1:42 pm

Interesting update, you gave us a good idea about Eliza's personality. And that last line...She's really selfish...They just believe that Traz is gone for good and trying to get croaked without regrets. Phineas is the only person who doesn't have that much negative thoughts i think. Poor Phineas, there can't be much a Carnymancer can do to save his side :(
Well great...i hate you, because now i have 2 things to hope for when i click Erfworld link in my browser... :D

1)An update including Lord Hamster
2)Update to A Tale from Traz
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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby cloudbreaker » Fri Aug 27, 2010 2:15 pm

zilfallon wrote:Well great...i hate you, because now i have 2 things to hope for when i click Erfworld link in my browser... :D

1)An update including Lord Hamster
2)Update to A Tale from Traz

I am flattered. I'm just glad that people read my story on occasion, but knowing people actually wait for it to update is all the more encouraging. Now I just hope that I don't somehow disappoint. ;)

Thank you everyone who reads my story!
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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby yay » Sun Aug 29, 2010 4:53 pm

great story, the puns are great and really tie it into erfworld as a whole. please keep writing, i'm hooked
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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby Nihila » Tue Aug 31, 2010 7:35 pm

Yeah, this story is awesome. It's like having a second Erfworld comic. Keep up the great writing!
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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby cloudbreaker » Wed Sep 01, 2010 11:29 am

I was all set and ready to post another update last night, but then the power went out for a second and the internet wouldn't work again until this morning. :| Hopefully I'll have better luck tonight.
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Re: Reactions to A Tale From Traz

Postby zilfallon » Fri Sep 03, 2010 11:54 am

Ouch, that must have hurt :( Keep trying, it won't always fail :D
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