Comments on "People Magic"

[Welf von Ehrwald]

So, this is it, my first fanfic in years. It's an idea I had some days ago and I wrote it down before I think too much about it and lose interest. Feel free to criticize as much as you want. Actually I ask you to do it. If I don't know what I did wrong I can't improve. Criticize everything, from the word choice and grammar to the idea and characterization.

[Sieggy]

Good beginning, though it could use some editing. (not being picky - pretty much everything requires editing . . .) I'm looking forward to the next installment!

[youngstormlord]

How important can one caster be Awesome start, can't wait to read the rest! Keep it coming!

[Welf von Ehrwald]

Thank you, praise helps writing
I'm working on the next part, and the story is coming together. And I guess you have to read some more to find out why they want that caster.

[youngstormlord]

Thank you, praise helps writing
I'm working on the next part, and the story is coming together. And I guess you have to read some more to find out why they want that caster.

Oh, I have read enough . Dessert + Florist = Jungle. I was just laughing because no one had thought to write the story about it before. I mean, I've read one line "Healomancy scrolls are harder to come by now." and wrote a fanfiction... You wrote something completely original!