So, this is it, my first fanfic in years. It's an idea I had some days ago and I wrote it down before I think too much about it and lose interest. Feel free to criticize as much as you want. Actually I ask you to do it. If I don't know what I did wrong I can't improve. Criticize everything, from the word choice and grammar to the idea and characterization.
I love uncroaked Dora. I love an anonymous friend even more.
Only one man has understood me, and even he has not!
Welf von Ehrwald wrote:Thank you, praise helps writing I'm working on the next part, and the story is coming together. And I guess you have to read some more to find out why they want that caster.
Oh, I have read enough . Dessert + Florist = Jungle. I was just laughing because no one had thought to write the story about it before. I mean, I've read one line "Healomancy scrolls are harder to come by now." and wrote a fanfiction... You wrote something completely original!
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