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	#{{note\|AquaVelva}}A reference to "Aqua Velva," a brand of aftershave/fragrance.		#{{note\|AquaVelva}}A reference to "Aqua Velva," a brand of aftershave/fragrance.
-	#{{note\|Frappacino}}A pun on the name of Al Pacino, an actor famous in part for his portrayal of gangsters, particularly Don Michael Corleone in ''The Godfather''. A "frappacino" is [http://www.starbucks.com/grocery/frappuccino.asp\| a brand of iced coffee beverage] sold by the Starbucks chain.	+	#{{note\|Frappacino}}A pun on the name of Al Pacino, an actor famous in part for his portrayal of gangsters, particularly Don Michael Corleone in ''The Godfather''. A "frappacino" is [http://www.starbucks.com/grocery/frappuccino.asp a brand of iced coffee beverage] sold by the Starbucks chain.
-	#{{note\|WeirdAl}}A reference to musical parodist [http://weirdal.com\|"Weird Al" Yankovic].	+	#{{note\|WeirdAl}}A reference to musical parodist [http://weirdal.com "Weird Al" Yankovic].
-	#{{note\|FishCalledWanda}}A reference to the movie [http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0095159\|''A Fish Called Wanda'']. Also, a possible metaphor for the state of the relationship between Jillian and [[Wanda Firebaugh]].	+	#{{note\|FishCalledWanda}}A reference to the movie [http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0095159 ''A Fish Called Wanda'']. Also, a possible metaphor for the state of the relationship between Jillian and [[Wanda Firebaugh]].

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		+	#{{note\|AquaVelva}}A reference to "Aqua Velva," a brand of aftershave/fragrance.
		+	#{{note\|Frappacino}}A pun on the name of Al Pacino, an actor famous in part for his portrayal of gangsters, particularly Don Michael Corleone in ''The Godfather''. A "frappacino" is [http://www.starbucks.com/grocery/frappuccino.asp\| a brand of iced coffee beverage] sold by the Starbucks chain.
		+	#{{note\|WeirdAl}}A reference to musical parodist [http://weirdal.com\|"Weird Al" Yankovic].
		+	#{{note\|FishCalledWanda}}A reference to the movie [http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0095159\|''A Fish Called Wanda'']. Also, a possible metaphor for the state of the relationship between Jillian and [[Wanda Firebaugh]].
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-	~~#{{note\|AquaVelva}}A reference~~ to ~~"Aqua Velva," a brand of aftershave/fragrance.~~	+
-	#{{note\|Frappacino}}A pun on the name of Al Pacino, an actor famous in part for his portrayal of gangsters, particularly Don Michael Corleone in ''The Godfather''. A "frappacino" is [http://www.starbucks.com/grocery/frappuccino.asp\| a brand of iced coffee beverage] sold by the Starbucks chain.	+
-	~~#{{note\|WeirdAl}}A reference to musical parodist [http://weirdal.com\|"Weird Al" Yankovic].~~	+
-	#{{note\|FishCalledWanda}}A reference to the movie [http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0095159\|''A Fish Called Wanda'']. Also, a possible metaphor for the state of the relationship between Jillian and [[Wanda Firebaugh]].	+
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Commander I. Heartly Noah at 20:13, 13 July 2010

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-	The second leg took them down a long [[water\|river]] valley that led to a bayside [[city]] called [[Aqua Velva]].{{ref\|AquaVelva}} It was a pretty little Level 2, its [[garrison]] made of blue slate stonework sealed with black tar, in crazy patterns. It had a defensible harbor with a complement of three black [[galleon]]s with white sails, bearing the red and black bat emblem of Transylvito. The ships were manned mostly by [[men]], but the ramparts were guarded by festive-looking [[scarecrow]]s. It was the first indication [[Jillian Zamussels\|Jillian]] had seen that [[Transylvito]] might have a [[Dollamancer]].	+	The second leg took them down a long [[water\|river]] valley that led to a bayside [[city]] called [[Aqua Velva]].{{ref\|AquaVelva}} It was a pretty little Level 2, its [[City_Zones#Garrison\|garrison]] made of blue slate stonework sealed with black tar, in crazy patterns. It had a defensible harbor with a complement of three black [[galleon]]s with white sails, bearing the red and black bat emblem of Transylvito. The ships were manned mostly by [[men]], but the ramparts were guarded by festive-looking [[scarecrow]]s. It was the first indication [[Jillian Zamussels\|Jillian]] had seen that [[Transylvito]] might have a [[Dollamancer]].

	The city had a regent [[warlord]] named [[Al Frappacino]],{{ref\|Frappacino}} an enormous, tanned man in a beige toga with gold garlands. He greeted [[Caesar Borgata\|Caesar]] with theatrical respect. Their [[stack]] stood in the [[City#Known City Zones\|courtyard]] while [[Al Frappacino\|Big Al]] kissed everyone's cheeks and made flowery small talk and everybody ignored Jillian completely.		The city had a regent [[warlord]] named [[Al Frappacino]],{{ref\|Frappacino}} an enormous, tanned man in a beige toga with gold garlands. He greeted [[Caesar Borgata\|Caesar]] with theatrical respect. Their [[stack]] stood in the [[City#Known City Zones\|courtyard]] while [[Al Frappacino\|Big Al]] kissed everyone's cheeks and made flowery small talk and everybody ignored Jillian completely.

Commander I. Heartly Noah at 02:24, 24 February 2010

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	"We got provisions set out for you!" shouted Al as he trundled up. "[[Titans]]' tonsils, Lady! These fish are my pets. They have names!"		"We got provisions set out for you!" shouted Al as he trundled up. "[[Titans]]' tonsils, Lady! These fish are my pets. They have names!"

-	"It's '[[~~Princes and Princesses\|Princess~~]].' If we're usin' titles," said Caesar quietly. He was addressing Al, who suddenly stared at him in confusion. Vinny also cocked an eyebrow at him. "Crazier'n a jug of bugs. But a princess. [[Don King]] tells me we're supposed to care about that now." Caesar punctuated this last statement by raising his own eyebrow.	+	"It's '[[Prince]]ss.' If we're usin' titles," said Caesar quietly. He was addressing Al, who suddenly stared at him in confusion. Vinny also cocked an eyebrow at him. "Crazier'n a jug of bugs. But a princess. [[Don King]] tells me we're supposed to care about that now." Caesar punctuated this last statement by raising his own eyebrow.

	The regent's face went slack at the mention of their sovereign [[ruler]]. "Well... arright, Princess. But please. We have plenty of stores you can [[inventory\|stock up]] on. Leave the fish alone." He sighed and clapped his hands, trying to recover himself. "C'mon, let's everybody go inside. Leave the fish."		The regent's face went slack at the mention of their sovereign [[ruler]]. "Well... arright, Princess. But please. We have plenty of stores you can [[inventory\|stock up]] on. Leave the fish alone." He sighed and clapped his hands, trying to recover himself. "C'mon, let's everybody go inside. Leave the fish."

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	The second leg took them down a long [[water\|river]] valley that led to a bayside [[city]] called [[Aqua Velva]].{{ref\|AquaVelva}} It was a pretty little Level 2, its [[garrison]] made of blue slate stonework sealed with black tar, in crazy patterns. It had a defensible harbor with a complement of three black [[galleon]]s with white sails, bearing the red and black bat emblem of Transylvito. The ships were manned mostly by [[men]], but the ramparts were guarded by festive-looking [[scarecrow]]s. It was the first indication [[Jillian Zamussels\|Jillian]] had seen that [[Transylvito]] might have a [[Dollamancer]].		The second leg took them down a long [[water\|river]] valley that led to a bayside [[city]] called [[Aqua Velva]].{{ref\|AquaVelva}} It was a pretty little Level 2, its [[garrison]] made of blue slate stonework sealed with black tar, in crazy patterns. It had a defensible harbor with a complement of three black [[galleon]]s with white sails, bearing the red and black bat emblem of Transylvito. The ships were manned mostly by [[men]], but the ramparts were guarded by festive-looking [[scarecrow]]s. It was the first indication [[Jillian Zamussels\|Jillian]] had seen that [[Transylvito]] might have a [[Dollamancer]].

SteveMB: /* Notes */

2009-07-14T00:40:11Z

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	#{{note\|AquaVelva}}A reference to "Aqua Velva," a brand of aftershave/fragrance.		#{{note\|AquaVelva}}A reference to "Aqua Velva," a brand of aftershave/fragrance.
-	#{{note\|Frappacino}}A pun on the name of Al Pacino, an actor famous in part for his portrayal of ~~multiple~~ gangsters, ~~especially~~ Don Michael Corleone in The Godfather. A "frappacino" is [http://www.starbucks.com/grocery/frappuccino.asp\| a brand of iced coffee beverage] sold by the Starbucks chain.	+	#{{note\|Frappacino}}A pun on the name of Al Pacino, an actor famous in part for his portrayal of gangsters, particularly Don Michael Corleone in ''The Godfather''. A "frappacino" is [http://www.starbucks.com/grocery/frappuccino.asp\| a brand of iced coffee beverage] sold by the Starbucks chain.
	#{{note\|WeirdAl}}A reference to musical parodist [http://weirdal.com\|"Weird Al" Yankovic].		#{{note\|WeirdAl}}A reference to musical parodist [http://weirdal.com\|"Weird Al" Yankovic].
-	#{{note\|FishCalledWanda}}A reference to the movie [http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0095159\|''A Fish Called Wanda'']. Also, a possible metaphor for ~~Jillian's~~ relationship to [[Wanda Firebaugh]].	+	#{{note\|FishCalledWanda}}A reference to the movie [http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0095159\|''A Fish Called Wanda'']. Also, a possible metaphor for the state of the relationship between Jillian and [[Wanda Firebaugh]].

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69.17.66.89 at 00:35, 14 July 2009

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	#{{note\|AquaVelva}}A reference to "Aqua Velva," a brand of aftershave/fragrance.		#{{note\|AquaVelva}}A reference to "Aqua Velva," a brand of aftershave/fragrance.
-	#{{note\|Frappacino}}A ~~reference to~~ "frappacino," [http://www.starbucks.com/grocery/frappuccino.asp\|a brand of iced coffee beverage]~~, and Al Pacino, an actor famous in part for his portrayal of multiple gangsters, especially Don Michael Corleone in The Godfather~~.	+	#{{note\|Frappacino}}A pun on the name of Al Pacino, an actor famous in part for his portrayal of multiple gangsters, especially Don Michael Corleone in The Godfather. A "frappacino" is [http://www.starbucks.com/grocery/frappuccino.asp\| a brand of iced coffee beverage] sold by the Starbucks chain.
	#{{note\|WeirdAl}}A reference to musical parodist [http://weirdal.com\|"Weird Al" Yankovic].		#{{note\|WeirdAl}}A reference to musical parodist [http://weirdal.com\|"Weird Al" Yankovic].
	#{{note\|FishCalledWanda}}A reference to the movie [http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0095159\|''A Fish Called Wanda'']. Also, a possible metaphor for Jillian's relationship to [[Wanda Firebaugh]].		#{{note\|FishCalledWanda}}A reference to the movie [http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0095159\|''A Fish Called Wanda'']. Also, a possible metaphor for Jillian's relationship to [[Wanda Firebaugh]].

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Commander I. Heartly Noah: /* Notes */

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	#{{note\|AquaVelva}}A reference to "Aqua Velva," a brand of aftershave/fragrance.		#{{note\|AquaVelva}}A reference to "Aqua Velva," a brand of aftershave/fragrance.
-	#{{note\|Frappacino}}A reference to "frappacino," [http://www.starbucks.com/grocery/frappuccino.asp\|a brand of iced coffee beverage].	+	#{{note\|Frappacino}}A reference to "frappacino," [http://www.starbucks.com/grocery/frappuccino.asp\|a brand of iced coffee beverage], and Al Pacino, an actor famous in part for his portrayal of multiple gangsters, especially Don Michael Corleone in The Godfather.
	#{{note\|WeirdAl}}A reference to musical parodist [http://weirdal.com\|"Weird Al" Yankovic].		#{{note\|WeirdAl}}A reference to musical parodist [http://weirdal.com\|"Weird Al" Yankovic].
	#{{note\|FishCalledWanda}}A reference to the movie [http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0095159\|''A Fish Called Wanda'']. Also, a possible metaphor for Jillian's relationship to [[Wanda Firebaugh]].		#{{note\|FishCalledWanda}}A reference to the movie [http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0095159\|''A Fish Called Wanda'']. Also, a possible metaphor for Jillian's relationship to [[Wanda Firebaugh]].

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SteveMB: More footnotes

2009-07-13T20:40:50Z

More footnotes

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-	The second leg took them down a long [[water\|river]] valley that led to a bayside [[city]] called [[Aqua Velva]]. It was a pretty little Level 2, its [[garrison]] made of blue slate stonework sealed with black tar, in crazy patterns. It had a defensible harbor with a complement of three black [[galleon]]s with white sails, bearing the red and black bat emblem of Transylvito. The ships were manned mostly by [[men]], but the ramparts were guarded by festive-looking [[scarecrow]]s. It was the first indication [[Jillian Zamussels\|Jillian]] had seen that [[Transylvito]] might have a [[Dollamancer]].	+	The second leg took them down a long [[water\|river]] valley that led to a bayside [[city]] called [[Aqua Velva]].{{ref\|AquaVelva}} It was a pretty little Level 2, its [[garrison]] made of blue slate stonework sealed with black tar, in crazy patterns. It had a defensible harbor with a complement of three black [[galleon]]s with white sails, bearing the red and black bat emblem of Transylvito. The ships were manned mostly by [[men]], but the ramparts were guarded by festive-looking [[scarecrow]]s. It was the first indication [[Jillian Zamussels\|Jillian]] had seen that [[Transylvito]] might have a [[Dollamancer]].

-	The city had a regent [[warlord]] named [[Al Frappacino]], an enormous, tanned man in a beige toga with gold garlands. He greeted [[Caesar Borgata\|Caesar]] with theatrical respect. Their [[stack]] stood in the [[City#Known City Zones\|courtyard]] while [[Al Frappacino\|Big Al]] kissed everyone's cheeks and made flowery small talk and everybody ignored Jillian completely.	+	The city had a regent [[warlord]] named [[Al Frappacino]],{{ref\|Frappacino}} an enormous, tanned man in a beige toga with gold garlands. He greeted [[Caesar Borgata\|Caesar]] with theatrical respect. Their [[stack]] stood in the [[City#Known City Zones\|courtyard]] while [[Al Frappacino\|Big Al]] kissed everyone's cheeks and made flowery small talk and everybody ignored Jillian completely.

	Jillian ignored them back. She wandered to the center of the slatework courtyard where a huge circular stone fountain stood, pouring water from the four sculpted mouths of a tentacled beast she had never seen before. Orange spotted [[wildlife\|fish]] the size of her forearm were swimming up to the edge of the fountain where she stood, as if expecting to be fed.		Jillian ignored them back. She wandered to the center of the slatework courtyard where a huge circular stone fountain stood, pouring water from the four sculpted mouths of a tentacled beast she had never seen before. Orange spotted [[wildlife\|fish]] the size of her forearm were swimming up to the edge of the fountain where she stood, as if expecting to be fed.
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		+	#{{note\|AquaVelva}}A reference to "Aqua Velva," a brand of aftershave/fragrance.
		+	#{{note\|Frappacino}}A reference to "frappacino," [http://www.starbucks.com/grocery/frappuccino.asp\|a brand of iced coffee beverage].
	#{{note\|WeirdAl}}A reference to musical parodist [http://weirdal.com\|"Weird Al" Yankovic].		#{{note\|WeirdAl}}A reference to musical parodist [http://weirdal.com\|"Weird Al" Yankovic].
	#{{note\|FishCalledWanda}}A reference to the movie [http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0095159\|''A Fish Called Wanda'']. Also, a possible metaphor for Jillian's relationship to [[Wanda Firebaugh]].		#{{note\|FishCalledWanda}}A reference to the movie [http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0095159\|''A Fish Called Wanda'']. Also, a possible metaphor for Jillian's relationship to [[Wanda Firebaugh]].

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