Talk:Battle for Gobwin Knob

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What I want you to do Jorgath, is to proof-read what I've written and fix mistakes, add info, re-write as necessary, etc. I've already done it with your section. I didn't really change much. Mostly got rid of links in the headers. I've also already gone ahead and taken care of the redirects too. Miment 22:56, 16 November 2009 (UTC)

On it Jorgath 17:36, 17 November 2009 (UTC)
Done. If there's anything else that needs to be done to your stuff, I can't find it. Jorgath 21:54, 17 November 2009 (UTC)
Awesome, thanks much. Miment 23:05, 17 November 2009 (UTC)

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What this page needs is a play by play. Prehaps we can also remove the TOC, or at least keep the template from showing it...

Should the fight between Stanley and TV/Jillian at the pass be a separate, concurrent battle? Jorgath 23:24, 10 November 2009 (UTC)

I would put in a paragraph about it. If there is an article for it, just put Main Article [[Battle At the Pass]] or whatever it's called. Nice start on the article BTW. I was gonna buckle down and just do it, but I'll wait for you to finish before I mess with anything. Miment 18:57, 11 November 2009 (UTC)
Thank you. That sounds good. Jorgath 02:00, 12 November 2009 (UTC)
Apparently, the battle in question is Second_Battle_of_Faq... I've been thinking about what to include as part of the fight, and I think it would be best to roll all the articles in {{CampaignGobwinKnob}} into Battle for Gobwin Knob and just turn most of them into re-directs. I mean, now that I'm thinking about it, we really don't need separate pages for everything that happened. I.E. Ansom's Assault and Fighting Retreat are the same fight, and there isn't enough info to even have separate pages. Miment 06:16, 12 November 2009 (UTC)
Sounds good. Would you like to handle the rolling and redirecting while I finish up this article? Jorgath 12:42, 12 November 2009 (UTC)
I'll roll and redirect once this article is up to scratch. Miment 00:57, 13 November 2009 (UTC)

Hey, I want to get this page finished and featured before Tuesday. Stanley has been up there for nearly two weeks :/ It's time for a new one. That's why I'm going ahead with all the writing on the page. Miment 22:08, 15 November 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, no worries. Just if you have any really major changes to what I've written, can we talk about them here first? Jorgath 22:17, 15 November 2009 (UTC)
Oh, to add...why don't you work on the Second and Final Stage stuff and I'll try to finish up the Initial Stage? Jorgath 22:21, 15 November 2009 (UTC)
Sure thing. Miment 22:25, 15 November 2009 (UTC)
Hmmm... Seems I'm going to have to re-read the first book :P Miment 22:31, 15 November 2009 (UTC)
Yeah :) Now you know what was taking me so long. Anyways, Initial Stage is done except for revision and references. Jorgath 22:57, 15 November 2009 (UTC)
I'll go ahead and read what you've done before doing any more work. You should add that Jillian told Wanda what Ansoms plans were. Oh, and should we refer to Wanda as Wanda or Lady Firebaugh? Or do you think it even matters? Miment 23:45, 15 November 2009 (UTC)

More notes. Need to think of what to do with Parsons_Plans... I think I'll go with Main Article [[XYZ]]

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