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The Descriptive Table Of Contents gives pages 9-36 as Day 2. The database for the TBFGK annotation pages gives pages 9-10 (Jillian taking off and hitting the troll's stack) as Day 2 (RCC turn) and pages 11-36 as Day 3 (starting with GK turn at pages 11-33, RCC turn at page 34, and Night at pages 35-36). Based on the fact the GK turn is in the morning and the RCC turn is in the afternoon, IMO the latter is correct. [[User:SteveMB|SteveMB]] 03:48, 22 May 2009 (UTC) | The Descriptive Table Of Contents gives pages 9-36 as Day 2. The database for the TBFGK annotation pages gives pages 9-10 (Jillian taking off and hitting the troll's stack) as Day 2 (RCC turn) and pages 11-36 as Day 3 (starting with GK turn at pages 11-33, RCC turn at page 34, and Night at pages 35-36). Based on the fact the GK turn is in the morning and the RCC turn is in the afternoon, IMO the latter is correct. [[User:SteveMB|SteveMB]] 03:48, 22 May 2009 (UTC) | ||
| + | : Fixed. [[User:Menlo Marseilles|Menlo Marseilles]] 07:22, 24 May 2009 (UTC) | ||
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I do not want to start edit wars, but I think "in a fire" is a bit confusing. It is not like something burnt and they died. I like "in flames" better. -- Muzzafar 20:12, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
- On the one hand, "in flames" fits the rules of standard English better, and is more accurate. On the other hand, "die in a fire" is a colloquialism and relatively common phrase among some geeks -- one can google for examples. Personally speaking, I'm rather fond of "coalition troops die in a fire" for the stylistic effect. That may just be me though. R3u 01:21, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- That's essentially what I was going for. Feel free to change it back if you feel strongly about it, though. 64.81.245.109 01:46, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- Well, since I suppose you guys are both native English speakers and I am not, I rely on your judgment. -- Muzzafar 04:15, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
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I am not sure it matters at this point how exactly Parson loses his consciousness. I suppose "one of the casters renders Parson unconscious" was enough. -- Muzzafar 20:12, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
- Perhaps "pointy-eared caster pinches Parson unconscious" is a good middleground? R3u 01:21, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- My intention was to collapse the two sub-sentences into one, as a means of making the description more concise/pretty without losing information. I'd be just as fine with "Parson is opposed and knocked unconscious by casters in the Magic Kingdom" or some similar. 64.81.245.109 01:46, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
- Aha, if length is the problem.. "Parson visits magic kingdom, gets complimentary involuntary nap"? R3u 02:52, 30 April 2009 (UTC)
Comic Links
How do you guys feel about changing the links from giantitp to this sites mirror? --Doran 21:31, 1 May 2009 (UTC)
- Done, although it looks like the most recent page hasn't gone up there yet. I'll give it some time before switching it back to the "opening act" index. 76.231.44.105 04:26, 3 May 2009 (UTC)
- Ok, nevermind, it was done already. Those darn arrows had me thinking they were still all GITP links.--BarGamer 15:20, 4 May 2009 (UTC)
Why do they link to the comic pages and not the Wiki pages?
Chronology Of Days (Days 2-3)
The Descriptive Table Of Contents gives pages 9-36 as Day 2. The database for the TBFGK annotation pages gives pages 9-10 (Jillian taking off and hitting the troll's stack) as Day 2 (RCC turn) and pages 11-36 as Day 3 (starting with GK turn at pages 11-33, RCC turn at page 34, and Night at pages 35-36). Based on the fact the GK turn is in the morning and the RCC turn is in the afternoon, IMO the latter is correct. SteveMB 03:48, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
- Fixed. Menlo Marseilles 07:22, 24 May 2009 (UTC)
